Continuing with Manish's lines...
She ran her hands over his face, his hair, tears streaming down her face all the while...
The beautiful alpenglow is covered by thick dark clouds marching in the sky. The roar of thunder is frightening the little critters. In another second, their soggy togs clung to the skin. The tiny droplets found their way to the scalp.
Her tears got washed away. He sees a cloud of sadness everywhere. It is hard to him, to her and to them.
Heavy breeze is slapping their faces. Trees dancing with rustle of the leaves adds to this.
"I can see your shadow in the dark,your face twinkling like a star." he said.
"I am lulled to sleep when the sweet songs emanating from your vocal cord reaches my ear drum..."
"I can see the ever lasting universe in your eyes..."
she said. "Hold my hands and never leave me...promise me..."
Pups at the sight of their mother,soaked and limping in pain, run and start sagging its udders. Squirrels are joyously playing with their mates. Birds twittering...frogs croaking...crickets chirping...
The civil war in the country is leaving people at dismay...
"I am yours ...yours for eternity...but I have to leave..my nation is calling me."
"The harrowing plight of poor people battered to death is urging me to go...."
When hate and betrayel is reigning the world on one side, his love is sobbing in his arms on the other side.. But he made up his mind. He has to leave her. Leave her to fight for peace. Time is running by..People are dying..
He says "Darling..this air smells of blood of poor innocent people..it needs to be washed away to be filled with peace.. "
"I am leaving today..hoping for the betterment of man and mankind.."
"I will miss seeing your pretty face..golden smile..trust me I will be there beside you forever..."
A Kiss and "I Love You..goodbyee....."
She ran her hands over his face, his hair, tears streaming down her face all the while...
The beautiful alpenglow is covered by thick dark clouds marching in the sky. The roar of thunder is frightening the little critters. In another second, their soggy togs clung to the skin. The tiny droplets found their way to the scalp.
Her tears got washed away. He sees a cloud of sadness everywhere. It is hard to him, to her and to them.
Heavy breeze is slapping their faces. Trees dancing with rustle of the leaves adds to this.
"I can see your shadow in the dark,your face twinkling like a star." he said.
"I am lulled to sleep when the sweet songs emanating from your vocal cord reaches my ear drum..."
"I can see the ever lasting universe in your eyes..."
she said. "Hold my hands and never leave me...promise me..."
Pups at the sight of their mother,soaked and limping in pain, run and start sagging its udders. Squirrels are joyously playing with their mates. Birds twittering...frogs croaking...crickets chirping...
The civil war in the country is leaving people at dismay...
"I am yours ...yours for eternity...but I have to leave..my nation is calling me."
"The harrowing plight of poor people battered to death is urging me to go...."
When hate and betrayel is reigning the world on one side, his love is sobbing in his arms on the other side.. But he made up his mind. He has to leave her. Leave her to fight for peace. Time is running by..People are dying..
He says "Darling..this air smells of blood of poor innocent people..it needs to be washed away to be filled with peace.. "
"I am leaving today..hoping for the betterment of man and mankind.."
"I will miss seeing your pretty face..golden smile..trust me I will be there beside you forever..."
A Kiss and "I Love You..goodbyee....."
4 comments:
hey nice story kiran. lol .. everytime a story ends either in pain, death , separation .. bla bla bla ..
nicely written newyayzzzz ..
I love it!! How nicely you portrayed he scene with perfect clarity.
nice one
soldiers are usually very clumsy with their feelings. Good one.
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